I have finished it!!! I'm so glad I was able to finish this book today. I felt it took me way to long to finish it. I didn't read as much as I had wanted to over the weekend but I managed to get it done today!
So my final thoughts...Overall I did enjoy the book. Like I said in a previous post, I felt that the first half of the second book could have been condensed. I know the author was wanting to show the progression of the characters and show them in a different environment other than fighting and training, but because of the way the first book was set up I felt the first part of the second book could have been condensed. The second half of the book I really enjoyed. Lots of action and seeing into the characters' changes was done well here. Again, the first book influenced my read of the second book because I feel they should be similar, and since there was a lot more action in the first book, I liked seeing the fighting scenes at the end of the second book.
One thing I did not like was how Sarah, the first girl we meet in the first book, kind of falls out of the story. I understand that the group wants to protect her and themselves and help her before she goes on missions, but she completely falls out of the story about 2/3 of the way through the second book. That was kind of a let down for me. We got so invested in her from the beginning and then she is gone with the groups leader and nothing from her since. I wanted Sarah to stay more involved till the end since she was such a big part of the first book and was fairly involved in the first half of the second book.
Another small thing....I noticed there were a lot of small grammatical mistakes. For example, odd spacing sometimes in the middle of a word, quotes misused, and sometimes the wrong word would be used all together; for example I saw "that" when it should have been "than". I don't know if I did not get a polished copy since I won the book in a goodreads.com giveaway, but either way there seemed to be too many. I usually don't mention these kinds of mistakes because usually I pass them by but there were enough here that I actually picked up on them. Like I said, I don't know if the copy I received was an unpolished version or what, but I felt I should mention it.
Overall though I did enjoy the book and I would recommend it to someone who is looking for a new book to read. Again, I would like to thank Kat Loveland for sending me the book from goodreads.com. I rated the novel a 4/5 on goodreads.com.
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My next book that I will be starting is another book I won on goodreads.com,
The Sky Tells No Lies by Don Derach.